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the hawk sails high overhead
scans the snow covered ground
for brave souls who dare to venture
dangerously into the white open space
hawk sails high
scans for brave creatures
in white open
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gathered in tall grass
glittering with morning dew
strangers watch balloons
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| Photo from Google Images
http://www.fullfreesoftware.com/post/bl/bluejay.html
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blue jays and cardinals
join robins, finches, starlings
in daily food search
Each image is crisp and new--I love the first--tho not a haiku for the idea of a hawk scaring us from our writing though I know you speak of snow (spell check sales/sails)--and the rewrite rocks as does your view of other flying things. For the balloons, I sensed them looking at me standing in the tall grass.
ReplyDeleteThank you Susan... :-)
ReplyDeleteVery nice take. Btw, that last name of yours sound Swedish... ?
ReplyDeleteThank you Bjorn.
DeleteYes, my name is indeed Swedish. On my father's side. :-)
Beautiful.
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Thank you Ann... :-)
ReplyDeleteA wonderful trio.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jules. My muse was a bit active today. :-)
DeleteI love all three...the last reminds me of feeding the birds and watching their antics last summer... while storm Rocky is blowing outside my window ! Thanks for the breath of spring.
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Thank you for your comments Siggi... :-)
DeleteBeautiful and the imagery is so clear. Love that blue jay too.
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