Friday, March 1, 2013

Soft New Snow

Photo credits: http://www.flickr.com/photos/assafs/3123092569/

Carpe Diem prompt (3.2.13): Sae kairu (returning cold)

Haiku Circle prompt: New

 paper white narcissus
new green fronds
surprised by fresh snow
floating gently down
from a soft gray sky

new narcissus fronds
blanketed in fresh snowfall
seasons intersect
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8 comments:

  1. WabiSabiMarch 1, 2013 at 7:27 PM

    Where I am the seasons often overlap. It's a wonderful thing!

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  2. joanneMarch 1, 2013 at 7:59 PM

    and seasons overlap too....I like your 'process' of the longer verse whittled down to haiku form...

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    1. UnknownMarch 2, 2013 at 9:02 AM

      Thank you Joanne. I enjoy the challenge of starting longer, then moving to the very essence of the meaning. :-)

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  3. Siggi in Downeast MaineMarch 1, 2013 at 10:33 PM

    Very nice...
    I especially like your line:
    "seasons intersect"

    Thank you for sharing
    Peace
    Siggi

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  4. AnonymousMarch 2, 2013 at 12:46 PM

    Lovely set ... I am always delighted when my daffodils erupt in surprise ... but know know know a whipping chill will not be far behind! And it has!

    Cold's Deception Lurks

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  5. Eliz FrankMarch 9, 2013 at 1:44 AM

    Beautiful twosome here. :-)
    Eliz

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