Friday, March 1, 2013

Soft New Snow

Photo credits: http://www.flickr.com/photos/assafs/3123092569/

Carpe Diem prompt (3.2.13): Sae kairu (returning cold)

Haiku Circle prompt: New

paper white narcissus
new green fronds
surprised by fresh snow
floating gently down
from a soft gray sky

new narcissus fronds
blanketed in fresh snowfall
seasons intersect


9 comments:

  1. Where I am the seasons often overlap. It's a wonderful thing!

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  2. and seasons overlap too....I like your 'process' of the longer verse whittled down to haiku form...

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    1. Thank you Joanne. I enjoy the challenge of starting longer, then moving to the very essence of the meaning. :-)

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  3. Very nice...
    I especially like your line:
    "seasons intersect"

    Thank you for sharing
    Peace
    Siggi

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  4. Lovely set ... I am always delighted when my daffodils erupt in surprise ... but know know know a whipping chill will not be far behind! And it has!

    Cold's Deception Lurks

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  5. Beautiful twosome here. :-)
    Eliz

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