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Carpe Diem prompt: Thin Ice
Haiku Circle prompt: Sound
fragile lives encased
in bubbles cold and blue
until one day is heard
sounds of thin ice snapping
fragile lives
encased in thin ice
breaking through
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sounds of cracking ice
warn of an unstable route
rethinking the path
All lovely. I really like seeing the different versions. The second one touches me the most. Fragile breaking through...
ReplyDeleteThank you Maggie... :-)
DeleteThe picture is beautiful
ReplyDeleteyou can feel the fragile
A lot of great set of images on ice. I can actually add one that comes from my skating.
ReplyDeleteSinging skates
melody will change
on thin ice
Actually when you skate on thin ice on a like, there is a singing sound, and you can hear on the pitch if it gets thinner. Risky :-)
Thank you Bjorn. I'm enjoying the image and sounds your haiku has just provided... :-)
DeleteReading your excellent haiku,
ReplyDeleteall of a sudden I thought of the sound of the ice that creaks and crackles when the big rig trucks go over ice in the winter...
Ice Road Truckers.
Thank you.
Peace
Siggi
I'd all but forgotten about ice skating and the sounds of the skates on the ice...thank you. As a child, it was skating on a pond in a park for me.
ReplyDeletePeace,
Siggi
Thankfully the impending predicted storm (that did in fact shut everything down for the day) didn't quite reach us. Less ice, can be good, especially when it is not on the road.
ReplyDeleteI like that from Brudberg...singing ice. The way the wind whistles through ice is 'cool' too.
These are beautiful haiku Dana! Did you change you blog template? Looks different. :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Yes, I'm rethinking my path too. ;-)
ReplyDeleteEliz